Best first flash ever.
You see, this is what happens when you stay too much on the computer.
If this is your ever first flash you've made, I will be willing to see your next flash too.
Graphics weren't awesome, but they weren't bad aswell. Needs more fixing, though. 6/10
Your style was the best thing in the flash. The graphics didn't have to be great because you have style. 9/10
The sound was great too. The violin was touching. If I was more sensitive, I would cry my ass off. 10/10
It didn't had much violence, just that suicide. But hey! Suicides are for going into a happier place, right?.. Right? 3/10
Interactivity was not that good. The "time remaining" thing was just showing random numbers. It could be better. 4/10
Not humour here. Just that he was on his computer dreaming going outside, lol. 1/10
Okay it could be alot better. Work on your graphics. Since it's your first submission I give you 5 and hope, so you can do even better flash. OVERALL 7/10
Take care!